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I won't let you break me by ~caroofy:iconcaroofy:



Snap out of it right now
Don’t wonder how
Just do it
Don’t have a fit
He isn’t worth your time
Or this rhyme
You’re not in love
The sun above
Doesn’t shine on you
When he smiles, it’s not true
The love in films isn’t real
It’s not how you feel
You’re being a fool
Losing that cool
You’ve worked for
Your heart doesn’t pour
With love, with blood
Just stop the flood
Of tears, stop crying
Inside, it’s lying
Your heart, it’s dying
When he’s here, not flying
It’s falling down
But don’t frown
So what if it’s broken
It’s useless, a token
Of vulnerability, of pain
Just don’t fix it again
Who needs it, be free
You can break my heart but I won’t let you break me
©2007-2009 ~caroofy
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Author's Comments

Yeah, just a bit of a wake up call.

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:iconthuper-cool:
Wow I love it <3

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Awake__&&__Unafraid

Asleep__or__Dead
:iconcaroofy:
thanks

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i'm not crazy, my reality is just different than yours
:iconnatasek:
:clasp: love the idea, and the way it's written, seems you have your own style ;)

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Everyone wants to be found.
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:iconcaroofy:
thanks, woot

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i'm not crazy, my reality is just different than yours
:iconpunkerbunker:
"The love in films isn’t real
It’s not how you feel"

I love that line, it's great. In fact the whole poem's great. And true. Really well written, you've got a very unique style (I've been looking at your other stuff too cos I'm a stalker you see). Keep up the good work :)

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All the cool kids are reading this:
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And then, they're joining this:
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Be cool. Like the cool kids.
:iconcaroofy:
Thanks, always good to have a stalker =)

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i'm not crazy, my reality is just different than yours

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